"In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years." -
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The argument states that power, in any institution,shouldn't be allowed to be centralized or constantly remain in the hands of a single person or group. I fully agree with this statement & believe that for any institution to operate efficiently & smoothly,the power center should regularly change in order to introduce new ways of thinking or new ideas. A person or group of persons,if allowed to remain in power for an indefinite time,more often than not becomes too comfortable in that postion. They get too used to the power in their hands & as a result,become overconfident & begin to misma...
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Thanks, I should really put
Thanks, I should really put aside some time at the end to review the final essay. Hopefully that'll be enough to catch these typing errors.
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The content is great. You are
The content is great. You are good at arguments. You only need to pay attention to the organization of the essay. Better like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: body 1
para 3: body 2
para 4: body 3
para 5: conclusion
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Sentence: A person or group of persons, if allowed to remain in power for an indefinite time, more often than not becomes too comfortable in that postion.
Error: postion Suggestion: position
Sentence: Another advantage provided by such a system is that it gives equal oppurtunities to all instead of confining power within a select group.
Error: oppurtunities Suggestion: opportunities
Sentence: Other members of the institution who may be genuinely talented & deserving of taking charge will thus get an oppurtunity to take up responsibility,thus increasing the institution's efficiency.
Error: oppurtunity Suggestion: opportunity
Sentence: They should be the ones to decide whether to keep the same group in power or to assign the responsibilty to a new one, even in times of trouble.
Error: responsibilty Suggestion: responsibility
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 515 350
No. of Characters: 2508 1500
No. of Different Words: 252 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.764 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.87 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.044 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5