College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
When applying to university, I had to take an important decision. Shall I apply for history of arts – a subject that has always thrilled me -, or instead choose economics, a field that interested me as well and that will probably offer me a well-paid job? Many students have to face such dilemmas early in their lives. Should they be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs? I believe the recommendation shall depend on the student’s circumstances such as alternatives, motivation, and financial possibilities.
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Sentence: In such a case pursuing a subject that is likely to lead to a sinecure position is definitely wiser than opting for a career path with gloomy job prospects.
Error: sinecure Suggestion: secure
Sentence: On the other hand, those that still do not know their place in life or that have to indebt themselves to finance their studies, should be advised to take up subjects with good prospects.
Error: indebt Suggestion: No alternate word
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