Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Yesterday was the history, tommorrow is the future, only today is the gift and that's why we call it present. Some people argue that Government need to pay more attention to the urgent problems of a current society, otheres believe that the authority has to be prescient to the problems of future. What happened in the future is based on the facts of the present. After weighting the evidence, it is certain that immediate problems of today overweights the predictable problems of the prospects.
Consider the example of the progress of science and it is clear, throughout history, the scientists were grounded relevant knowledage or research. Without such corresponding techniques, they would not be able to solve more advanced problems. The Quantum Mechanics, for instance, as one of the most remarkablily successful discoveries of the history, was based on many research and solutions which had been provided by predcessors. The problem posed to us today would be the problem in the future if we could not solve. More precisely, the anticipated problems is itslef a characteristic of the current problems. Furthermore, the immediate problems related to welfare might be developed, according to historical affairs, to the unstablization if the government postpone it.
Second instance in which the governments is necessarily to foucus on solving the problems of the present is the development of Iraq. Twenty years ago,as a second superpower in Mid esat, Iraq was enjoying its prosperousity from the bolstering development of its crude oil business. However, instead of furthering progress the country's development, it started developing nuclear weapons, which the government claimed that it would be the solution to the anticipated threat from the West. After that, Iraq was accused of possessing destructive weapons by the United Nations and consequently, its people suffered from the sanctions made by the rest of world and the government collapsed.
In final analysis, it is clear that soving the problems of today is, to large extent, to provide a better guidence for the foreseen problems. Leving the problems of the presence will exacerbate, particularly those urgent ones, the problems and consequently, demands of much more time and resources to solve in the future.
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Sentence: Some people argue that Government need to pay more attention to the urgent problems of a current society, otheres believe that the authority has to be prescient to the problems of future.
Error: otheres Suggestion: others
Error: prescient Suggestion: present
I did, however, meant to say the prescient,not the present.
Sentence: More precisely, the anticipated problems is itslef a characteristic of the current problems.
Description: The fragment the anticipated problems is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: Furthermore, the immediate problems related to welfare might be developed, according to historical affairs, to the unstablization if the government postpone it.
Description: The fragment government postpone it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace postpone with verb, past tense
Sentence: Yesterday was the history, tommorrow is the future, only today is the gift and that's why we call it present.
Error: tommorrow Suggestion: tomorrow
Sentence: Some people argue that Government need to pay more attention to the urgent problems of a current society, otheres believe that the authority has to be prescient to the problems of future.
Error: otheres Suggestion: others
Error: prescient Suggestion: present
Sentence: Consider the example of the progress of science and it is clear, throughout history, the scientists were grounded relevant knowledage or research.
Error: knowledage Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: The Quantum Mechanics, for instance, as one of the most remarkablily successful discoveries of the history, was based on many research and solutions which had been provided by predcessors.
Error: predcessors Suggestion: predecessors
Error: remarkablily Suggestion: remarkably
Sentence: More precisely, the anticipated problems is itslef a characteristic of the current problems.
Error: itslef Suggestion: itself
Sentence: Second instance in which the governments is necessarily to foucus on solving the problems of the present is the development of Iraq.
Error: foucus Suggestion: focus
Sentence: Twenty years ago,as a second superpower in Mid esat, Iraq was enjoying its prosperousity from the bolstering development of its crude oil business.
Error: prosperousity Suggestion: prosperous
Error: esat Suggestion: east
Sentence: In final analysis, it is clear that soving the problems of today is, to large extent, to provide a better guidence for the foreseen problems.
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