A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
All students in nation now are abide to their respective curriculum provided by schools. Each school sticks to any one curriculum that is decidedly head of the school. Here freedom is given to administrator of school rather than to higher education ministry .I agree with the version that a nation should have national curriculum .Curriculum of students decides the method of study, the way they approach towards their subject. Curriculum of the school has mainly depends upon the subjects ,equal importance of all subjects, regional language discrimination
Firstly coming to the regional discrimination of regional languages into curriculum ,makes the curriculum clumsy and rigid. Every region will have own importance to their regional language to developed or included in the curriculum. The inclusion of regional languages discriminates other languages and gives less importance to other subjects in curriculum. So having common language like international, national language makes sense to implemented in the curriculum
Secondly coming to the varied subjects in different curriculum's affect students once they enter common platform at their colleges. Even now there are some schools which choose extra subjects ,unnecessary subjects .Having common curriculum saves confusion among the student which is better .And students have their strong basic concepts in all subjects .Discrimination doesn't exist when we have common curriculum
Lastly coming to the equal importance of subjects in two curriculum namely ICSE,CBSE .We can see that in icse there is importance to computer languages than to other curriculum s where as cbse mainly concentrates on science deeply.So there is no common platform for a student where he can give equal importance to all subjects .Student will have a interests to learn more .
Now a days it maintaining a school or a college has become business where each school chooses its own curriculum. So there should be a initiative taken by the government to see that future of students doesn't land into trouble and place common platform.
Nation having a common platform will shape future of students in various regions .It gives them rejoice to learn more and move forward in life
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