As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
In this fast-paced, mordernized world, technology seems to dominate almost every household in developed nations. Technology dictates almost every aspect of our lives, as people are hungry for convienence. Altas are now replaced by GPS, books are replaced by Kindle, Nook, and other portable reading devices, and homephones are replaced by cellphones. People rely more and more on technology to solve problems, because technology provides a quick and efficient way to fix those problems. Technology does not hinder the ablity for humans to think for themselves, but provides people with new ways of s...
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Sentence: In this aspect, technology helps us organize our information digitally to save time when we have to pull up information; at the same time, when it does not always pull up the full information, we have think outside the box to of ways for it to populate all of related materials that we need.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and think
Sentence: In this fast-paced, mordernized world, technology seems to dominate almost every household in developed nations.
Error: mordernized Suggestion: modernized
Sentence: Technology dictates almost every aspect of our lives, as people are hungry for convienence.
Error: convienence Suggestion: convenience
Sentence: Technology does not hinder the ablity for humans to think for themselves, but provides people with new ways of solving problems with efficacy.
Error: ablity Suggestion: ability
Sentence: With the development of techonology, finding solutions to problems is now easier than ever.
Error: techonology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: Without technology, the world would not be as intergated as it right now.
Error: intergated Suggestion: integrated
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