As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. on
Technology has been an integral part of humanlife from the time immemorial,the basic technology that humans initially relied upon was fire.There on,there has been a tremendous transition from bullock carts to bugati,with technology modelling every bit of the world around us,task that would otherwise be inconceivable without humans tapping the potential through the technology.
The statement propounds that the cognitive capacity of humans will deteriorate with increasing reliance on technology,based on the preposterous assumption that increase in technology negates the need to think,but in re...
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Sentence: Technology has been an integral part of humanlife from the time immemorial,the basic technology that humans initially relied upon was fire.There on,there has been a tremendous transition from bullock carts to bugati,with technology modelling every bit of the world around us,task that would otherwise be inconceivable without humans tapping the potential through the technology.
Description: The fragment time immemorial , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace immemorial with adverb
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to time and immemorial
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No. of Characters: 1870 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.238 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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