As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Man's journey was, is and always will be quest for knowledge. From the very start of this quest man has invented and discovered many a things. He found out myriad things which made his life easy. One among them is technology. Technology, not only made mans life easy but also revolutionized mans life in many ways, from the way he lives to way he travels to way he is cremated.
Technology has yielded us many things. From flying machines carrying people to machines calculating lacs and crores of calculations in a second to humanoids which can probably replace humans. Technology has its roots deeply penetrated into every aspect of life;health, economy, and even position of your zodiac signs. One can promisingly say that even a days life would be misearable with no technology playing its role that day. Scientists and inventors claim that artificial intelligence, a latest technology probably can think on behalf of humans which might make mans life easy to live.
It is for sure that man now a days is highly dependent on technology. But one can not just say that technology is every thing in a mans life. While necessity is the mother of invention, man is the father and it sounds halarious the other way round. How much ever technology may develop, its still us, men who are developing it. We are and will be for ever the root cause of development in any aspect of life.
But the present generation of men, are so dependent on technology that even to invent new technology they depend on the existing technology. This states a potential threat for human race and its ability to think for itself. Not to be exaggerated but in a few millinia we might end up with a judgement day where technology with its artificial intelligence would take over man.
Hence it might be conclude that there is always a potential threat of people loosing their ability tio think for themselves, more they rely on the technology. But it's just a cliche. As sid before 'Man is the father of technology.'.
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As if man was thinking for
As if man was thinking for themselves in the first place, and not looking down upon others to formulate wisdom from emotion, with not a care for the effects of different human behaviors from both himself and others, and how they shape the way he and others think, and thus put his own actions at and beyond his comprehension, like a dog chasing his tail.
Sentence: Technology, not only made mans life easy but also revolutionized mans life in many ways, from the way he lives to way he travels to way he is cremated.
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Sentence: One can promisingly say that even a days life would be misearable with no technology playing its role that day.
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Sentence: Scientists and inventors claim that artificial intelligence, a latest technology probably can think on behalf of humans which might make mans life easy to live.
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Sentence: Hence it might be conclude that there is always a potential threat of people loosing their ability tio think for themselves, more they rely on the technology.
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Sentence: As sid before 'Man is the father of technology.'.
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