People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People behave differently with different people in different situations. Behaviour is that aspect of a personality that exhibits the mental status of a person. A literate person’s behaviour differs from an illiterate person. But whoever it may be, a person’s behaviour is an outcome of all the attributes of the situations, surroundings and people around him and not only by an individual’s mindset. Thus it will be apt to say that people’s behaviour is governed majorly by the external factors and not by the forces of their own making. A response to a situation can be varied from person to...
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