55. In order for any work of art - for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song- to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Some people argue that a work of art has no value when not many people cannot understand its meaning. While accessibility is one of the virtue of arts, as suggested by the statement, I believe it is not necessarily true.
Admittedly, the more understandable a work of art is, the more effect and benefit it brings to the society. Evaluation on a work of art is basically up to those who comprehend and enjoy it. Thus, when a piece of art is too extricate to understand, lesser people would recognize its value and its merit to the society will be significantly diminished. Avantgarde music in 20th century, for instance, is highly disparaged because its intricacy made itself extremely esoteric. People did not understand what the music tried to deliver, and moved to pop music, which they were more familiar with. Likewise, considering art is also the object of consumption, art definitely have more value when more people understand it.
However, we can not deny the fact that even intricate arts can have significant value and become masterpieces. Even some works enjoyed by few people can have scholar importance and thereby give significant contribution to the society. "Ulysses" by James Joyce is an epitome of intricate literature which is highly regarded by many people. Though ordinary people cannot even have a grasp of the contents novel, many scholars extol the novel for its sophisticated linguistics and artistic composition. Likewise, intricacy of an art do not clearly rule out the possibility it gains fame.
Even arts currently denigrated and ignored can be revisited in the future. Social contexts where people perceive arts gradually evolve and along with view toward the works of arts. The aforementioned avantgarde music ended up with big failure as contemporary people did not understand. But some of its components such as minimalism evolved as time went by and many musicians in various genres started adopting the techniques, and ideas avantgarde music used. Likewise, though a art of work might be currently esoteric, we don't know how the value of it be in the future.
In conclusion, the statement is skewed toward overdone generalization on what the value of art is. Indeed, even arts hard to understand can have significant value, or be revisited in the future as views toward art change
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, thus, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13054830287 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01269506565 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527415143603 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6487322189 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.25 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213447166873 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688928153473 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425958512538 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122829927331 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311448625541 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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