In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero
Due to the development of the modern society, information exploration prompts that people are aspiring to the most sensational messages and news, which also cause most of media make a profit with prying people’s privacy. Therefore, some people consider that it is possible for this society to regard someone as a hero. But in my opinion, heroes still exists in this era.
Admittedly, with the media’s scrutiny, more and more scandals are exposed about many famous people in the commercial or policy world, most of them are unbelievable, for example, Watergate issue is the most famous scandal happened in election of American President, Richard Nixon designate his subordinates to steal elective confidential files, this event became the biggest stigma in his live and destroyed his image and reputation, whatever how many contribution he has done in American economy or in livelihood.
However, not every media only reveal ugly news and scandals about famous people, still there are some media focus on some events about citizen’s courage and contribution and about some policemen devotes their lives on fighting illegal act. Even if some of them just a heartwarming behavior, but these contributors enough to be called hero in one’s mind. For example, COVID-19 exploded in Wuhan, China, which is a novel virus and easily affect people with highly infectious. Because the lacking of therapy, if someone is infected, which means he is stepping into death slowly. But some volunteers still initiatively participate in the medical team, they can be called the hero and engraved in our mind forever after reporting by media without any scandals.
In addition, the real hero never mind the attentions from media, because they have attained achievement in their realm on the one hand, keeping a healthy and positive lifestyle in their private life on the other hand, there is no choice to media to expose some scandals about them, or comparing their accomplishment, these false and mistakes are minuscule. For example, F.D.Roosevelt introduced new policies to alleviate the pressure of The Great Depression with the lowest rate of employment a myriad of reforms involving agriculture, industry and banking fields and leaded the victory of the second world war, he also have the ex-marital scandal, however, he is still called the greatest American President in 20 century.
Consequently, revealing scandals by media for maximizing its profit becomes more and more easier for the reporters to chase after the celebrities and dig into their private life. But the media’s capacity not only reveals the scandal, but announces the justice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the media') or simply say ''most media''.
Suggestion: most of the media; most media
...nal messages and news, which also cause most of media make a profit with prying people’s priv...
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun contribution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many contributions'.
Suggestion: many contributions
... his image and reputation, whatever how many contribution he has done in American economy or in l...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Roosevelt
...istakes are minuscule. For example, F.D.Roosevelt introduced new policies to alleviate th...
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Line 4, column 620, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ictory of the second world war, he also have the ex-marital scandal, however, he is ...
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Line 4, column 715, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...d the greatest American President in 20 century. Consequently, revealing scandals by m...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... maximizing its profit becomes more and more easier for the reporters to chase after the ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28028503563 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77555451538 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572446555819 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.339931151 60.3974514979 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.0 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3846153846 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 5.21951772744 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177203353162 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718359817931 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071162848888 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100565339694 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447259197029 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.