an ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients.through gaining such access,the ailing patient many better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
The issue of the ailing patient should have eassy to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afficted patients.Such that the paitents of the medical condition is better to the outher condition and doctor is component to treat that the medical condition.
The issue will be agree with the recomandation.This ailing patient is to easy to the access and gaining such as access.The doctor's such as patient that the medical condition and his record to the treating condition and his differnt type of the trating that is not access to the term of the condition so doctor is better to the outside of the treating so we have agree to this condition.
This time medical condition is not to very good so far we have opplised that the old aling patient is devploing and to medical condition. In such a time doctor are patient one time such a patient to some big ingery tha and we have some aplogised to the doctor treatment and they get more gaining such acess to the ingery .onother time some patient is very critical sicuation and medical condition is not good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Such
...of treating similarly afficted patients.Such that the paitents of the medical condit...
^^^^
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ue will be agree with the recomandation.This ailing patient is to easy to the access...
^^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: TO_TOO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...he recomandation.This ailing patient is to easy to the access and gaining such as ...
^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...o the access and gaining such as access.The doctors such as patient that the medica...
^^^
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... the outside of the treating so we have agree to this condition. This time medical...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... This time medical condition is not to very good so far we have opplised that t...
^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent and they get more gaining such acess to the ingery .onother time some patient...
^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t more gaining such acess to the ingery .onother time some patient is very critic...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'similarly', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239583333333 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.15625 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0880659088768 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0625 0.0497285424764 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0416666666667 0.0444667217837 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.078125 0.12292977631 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0625 0.0406280797675 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60694197219 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0729166666667 0.030933414821 236% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135416666667 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104166666667 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00520833333333 0.0148568991511 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1066.0 2732.02544248 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 452.878318584 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67021276596 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.58838876751 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335106382979 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148936170213 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101063829787 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60694197219 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 219.290929204 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404255319149 0.48968727796 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 32.8236306424 55.4138127331 59% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6194690265 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.380412469 201% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7962840899 59.4972553346 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 266.5 141.124799967 189% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 23.380412469 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 72.0 51.4728631049 140% => OK
Elegance: 1.46 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.573351090447 0.391690518653 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.486625008695 0.123202303941 395% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.132194720372 0.077325440228 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.911793509953 0.547984918172 166% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109786980393 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.407056596911 0.161403998019 252% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142360147055 0.0892212321368 160% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.610717556403 0.385218514788 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132978664126 0.0692045440612 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.469035465453 0.275328986314 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113992507505 0.0653680567796 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.