People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

People make decision based on emotion and justify those decision with logic is poor that the is mansion that the issues.I am agree with the this statement.

People some time it is decision based on emotion in not good because of some people in emotion is very residual and he get wrong decision that time.One day some people playing a game and one people is ingerd them so the other people deride that he is not playing to this game.So this time is poor decision maker.

The another think is one of the day people get less mark to the examination and he is decide.He not to study graduation.This time people is poor decision maker.So that people not to thinking any time with his emotion.

People make a decision based on emotion some time is benefit that like as some people die and you save that people life so it's good and that is the benefit of the your emotion. Another think as example some people is walk in way some traffic are there so get there emotion and they are clear those traffic this time emotion is good thinking.

so this issues we concision that some time emotion is good but the logic afterwards are poor decision maker in this issues.the all think is not true

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279279279279 0.240241500013 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.184684684685 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945945945946 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0495495495495 0.0444667217837 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108108108108 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0315315315315 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.19461307082 2.79330140395 79% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018018018018 0.030933414821 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.148648648649 0.0997080785238 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0249443105267 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.0148568991511 61% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1190.0 2732.02544248 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 452.878318584 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48387096774 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.58838876751 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276497695853 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198156682028 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.10599078341 0.200843997647 53% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.036866359447 0.132149295362 28% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.19461307082 2.79330140395 79% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 219.290929204 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405529953917 0.48968727796 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.6884274105 55.4138127331 63% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 36.1666666667 23.380412469 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0635610526 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.333333333 141.124799967 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 23.380412469 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.9823348694 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.52459016393 1.64882698954 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256771315327 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.327338669904 0.123202303941 266% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105956194503 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.92525140869 0.547984918172 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107195927621 0.149214159877 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182229939348 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725799963589 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.418804614482 0.385218514788 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0950701171007 0.0692045440612 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193670808961 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772928485016 0.0653680567796 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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