People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some people have the tendency to make decisions in a hasty manner with little or no thought. These people make decisions based on emotion and justify their decision afterwards with some logic. If you take a look at what's happening in our daily lives, or even the world history for a matter of fact, most of the decisions taken by people or leaders worldwide out of emotion rather than thorough reasoning have proved to be fatal. Not only did they cause major financial losses but also human loss in many of the cases. I believe that such people are often poor decision makers and this can be justified.
Firstly, after many studies and experiments scientists have concluded that decisions always should be taken in a peace of mind, i.e we need to make sure that we are calm and stable before reacting or taking any decision. This is because when we are angry, sad or in any other emotion, our brain is not capable of thinking and reasoning properly. We think that what we are doing is correct because we are driven by intense emotions, and the decisions that we take in such a state of mind are usually very slapdash and have negative consequences. Consider Hitler for example. He had the notion that his race was superior than every other race. He wanted power and control and initiated the second world war out of emotion which destroyed the economies of several major nations and decimated and large chunk of the world population. He was responsible for the murders of thousands if not millions of jews and justified his decisions by claiming that they were an inferior race. However, today the world knows that the decision he took was absolutely unacceptable.
Consider another instance where the United states decided to start a war against Iraq. This decision by the president was purely out of emotion. The war against Iraq was one of the worst wars in US history. It causes a mammoth loss to the economy and thousands of American soldiers have died in the war. The president justified his decision by saying that it was a war against terrorism. However, now most of us realize that the situation could be dealt in a better manner and that his hasty and emotion driven decisons have caused consequences which we face till date.
Finally, in some cases it might be appropriate to take sudden decisions out of emotion. Canada for instance opened it's borders for millions of refugees from the war stricken countries out of the feeling of humanity. This was a sudden and emotion driven decision back thanks to it, these refugees have found a new and safe home. Even though in some cases it might be justifiable, I think the negatives outrule the poititives and hence, decisions taken out of emotion are poor deci
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ple have the tendency to make decisions in a hasty manner with little or no thought. These people...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... with some logic. If you take a look at whats happening in our daily lives, or even t...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...d the notion that his race was superior than every other race. He wanted power and c...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd large chunk of the world population. He was responsible for the murders of thou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75157894737 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46280159366 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8427662575 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1304347826 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261203497589 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811673635002 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904116807983 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16652586003 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100677215306 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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