People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
An every individual is need to take a decision in life to be successful.The one who makes a decision based on calculated consequences and in beneficiaries of all the people who follows him are to be said as good leader.The premises that people who makes decision based on emotions without logic is deemed to fail and will be a poor decision maker. A leader is respected who takes initiative and responsibility of every action and decision he makes.
A perfect example can be Loco pilot of train who have have responsibility for thousand of people traveling on train and even small mistake can be fatal, margin of errors is very slim.There can been an instances when some one might be run over by train but pilot cannot pull of emergency brakes because that can cause derailing of train having casualties outnumbering with great margin if he would have chose to saving one person.
Similarly a soldier from an army have to always protect the borders from terrorism and trespasser or even worst soldier from neighboring country in war like conditions and at that time soldier cannot be sympathetic towards enemy, Because that would put entire nation on threat.
Furthermore decision like demonetization made by Indian government is a perfect example of well calculated decision.If leaders would have gotten emotional over public standing in ques for 12 hours to replace there money. An entirety of the mission to eliminate black money would have failed.
Hence based on the example provided above i completely agree with the premises that the individual who makes the decision based on emotions is deemed to fail and is poor decision maker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98909090909 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79621940756 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.569295083 60.3974514979 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.0 118.986275619 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22909289937 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120130867079 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116656438075 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139919252681 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128529449803 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.