All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The speaker asserts that it is needed to require all parents to volunteer time to their kid's schools. Although there are not all parents who have time to attend schools, such policy help parents achieve their family responsibility and children grow up smoothly; So, I agree with the speaker.
To begin with, requiring all parents to volunteer time to their children's schools helps parents accomplish their family obligation, since parents can know what their children is lacking. In order to maintain family's operation normally, children's growing cannot be ignored. Only realizing their children's need, parents can know how to make children improving. Thus, after going to schools, parents can know how to help their children, and then fulfill their family responsibility.
Further, children can also benefit from such policy. Since children want to be know more, parents go to their schools can make children's need known. After knowing their children's mistake, parents can point out it and help children improve. For example, when learning the process of system value, parents must know what is mistake their children doing. Only knowing it and point out it, children can learn their lesson. After growing, children can fulfill their duties in the future, because they have more probability to success.
Although, requiring parents to volunteer time to their children's school have positive effect on family, there are all parents who have enough time to attend schools. For example, if parent's occupation is business boos, lawyer, or other occupation that is busy, parents cannot have extra time to fulfill such policy; So this policy is not suitable to all parents.
To sum up, except for some parents whose occupation is busy, requiring parents to their children's schools not only have positive influence on family, but also help children growing; Therefore, I agree with what the speaker says.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, except for, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30363036304 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45415878843 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7834808495 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260036334894 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121961565394 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667024304097 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184739942493 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300859824866 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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