All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is good for parents, teachers, and students to have time together because it makes more possibility for interactions between them which is going to have positive consequences. However, schools' administerations should not make a volunteer time mandatery for all parents because of time and money matter.
Parents can know their children better when they volunteer times to their children's schools. For example, imagine a parent who are always busy with their fulltime jobs and daily responsibilities, so they might not have enough time to interact with their child. As a result, they even can loose track of their child educational plan which is not good. On the other hand, a parent get an announsement from school that they should come to school and spend some times with their child. This can give an apportunity to a parent to have more communication in school environmnet. For example, they can observe their child interaction with teachers and other classmates that is beneficial for better parenting.
Additionally, parents can learn and teach something new by spending time in their children's schools. Consider a parent who have a presentation about healthy diet choices. As a result, students and teachers learn usefull nutritional options.
On the contrary, some parents might get upset by being forced to spend time in their children's schools which is understandable sometimes. For example, low-income families who always work hard to provide a good finicial environment for their children will not have an extra time to be volunteered at schools. In this cases, schools' administrations should make exeptions for busy and low-income parents. On the other hand, some parents might have disabilities that will make embarassing situation for their kids. Imagine a student who gets mocked by her classmates because of her disabaled mother of father. As a result, a mandatory volunteering time is not going to be beneficial.
It is beneficial to have more communication between parent and students in schools environments; however, it should be optional for parents to spend some times with their kids at school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for example, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26843657817 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99787459917 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454277286136 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9942020816 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265683147196 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103482403877 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602126765232 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171672468742 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470596244797 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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