All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is good for parents, teachers, and students to have time together because it makes more opportunities for interactions between them that is going to have positive consequences. However, schools' administrations should not make a volunteer time mandatory for all parents because of time and money matter.
Parents can know their children better when they volunteer times to their children's schools. For example, imagine a parent who are always busy with their fulltime jobs and daily responsibilities, so they might not have enough time to interact with their child. As a result, they even can lose track of their child educational plan that is not good. This can give an opportunity to a parent to have more communication with their child in school environment when they a parent get an announcement from school that they should come to school and spend some times with their child. For example, they can observe their child interaction with teachers and other classmates that is a good chance for parents to raise their kids better.
Additionally, parents can learn and teach something new by spending time in their children's schools. Consider a parent who are dietitian and have a presentation about healthy diet choices. As a result, students and teachers learn useful nutritional options.
On the contrary, some parents might get upset by being forced to spend time in their children's schools that is understandable sometimes. For example, low-income families who always work hard to provide a good financial environment for their children will not have an extra time to be volunteered at schools. In this case, schools' administrations should make exceptions for busy and low-income parents. On the other hand, some parents might have disabilities that will make embarrassing situation for their kids. Imagine a student who is mocked by her classmates because of her disabled mother or father, so a mandatory volunteering time is not going to have a positive consequence in this case.
It is a good opportunity to have more communication between parent and students in schools environments; however, it should be optional for parents to spend some times with their kids at school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, for example, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19491525424 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9664635238 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432203389831 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.728777523 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9375 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236855237338 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102681480417 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576262111522 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155847688994 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040707692267 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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