All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary

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All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...spend time listening to their employees so as to function effectively. Indisputably, a c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 555, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...mpany to work well. It is them who work everyday to help the company function. So, wont ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 606, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... help the company function. So, wont it be better to ask them what solutions they ...
^^
Line 1, column 704, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...r the firm to work to its full capacity?Thus, I generally agree with the statement t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...t decisions? Furthermore, it would be more better if ideas comes from those who have to w...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, nonetheless, so, thus, well, apart from, as for, as to, for example, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10994764398 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92979540321 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431937172775 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5322542062 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415958178912 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1587280977 0.0831039109588 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101739327772 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235525335847 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110916958945 0.0667264976115 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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