Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do
I disagree with the statement that young people enjoy their life more than old people. I think this for the following reasons.
First of all, young people have a lot of job stress which makes it difficult for them to have fun. They are constantly working from 9-5 to earn good money for a better lifestyle and facilities. They couldn’t just sit back and have a relaxing cup as the old people can do. For example, I live in a joint family. I have seen my dad constantly working and coming home tired and my grandpa, on the other hand, listens to good music, chat with his friends, and play games. He says that old age is the best time of his life.
Furthermore, young adults have responsibilities to fulfill. They have to pay the loans and other household expenses. They sometimes have to think twice before spending any money on extravagant activities or things. Whereas, the old people have no duties to accomplish. They have paid off all the loans and have saved enough money to spend on vacations and other non-essential things. My mom’s dad goes on a vacation every year since his retirement. He must have visited 6 countries by now. I wish I could have a fun explorative life like his.
Lastly, young people have so much to accomplish in life, such as a successful career that they are always in a state of constant worry and stress. They cannot think about relaxing and having fun rather than accomplishing their goals. Old people live a tension free life because they have had their enough share of stress and now its time for them to enjoy the last few years of their life.
Tp sum up, old people enjoy their life more than young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
...ons. First of all, young people have a lot of job stress which makes it difficult for the...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey on extravagant activities or things. Whereas, the old people have no duties to accom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, for example, i think, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58389261745 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44560664196 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.576085083 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229874248323 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807440444986 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118431002376 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207384137121 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141440766353 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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