young people enjoy life more than older people do

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young people enjoy life more than older people do

Some people find life more enjoyable as they get older. Others think that youth is life's peak. Although, both sides of the argument can be seen as valid, I believe that young people can get out more of their life than old people.

To start with, I think young people enjoy life more because they can better spend their money. There are fewer financial worries when one is young. Similarly, Young people do not have to worry about supplying a family on their own. Drawing from my own experience. When I was a teen, I did not have to worry about paying the utility bills or a mortage. It was not until I was older and living by myself, that I understood how much money it takes to support oneself. Although, some people believe that getting older means having more freedom, I think that is not the case with money.

Being younger, in addition to allowing financial freedom, permits making better use of one's well-being. Older people are at a higher risk when making wild changes in their lifestyle. Therefore, old people might miss out in risky activities like extreme sports, traveling, smoking or drinking. For example, my neighbor David, although being in good shape and excellent financial situation for his age, has diet restrictions from his medic that disable him from trying new foods, cuisines and sports. As a result, I think young people are at an advantage by being able to use their well-being.

Another reason I think life is more vivid during youth is that young people can make friends more easily than old people can. Young people are able to meet people in common places like college, a party and at work. Likewise, old people tend to feel lonely because of the generational gap that might exist between them and others in the environment. Consequently it is not possible for older people, who might be opened to interact with others, to connect with society since there are simply fewer people who they can relate to in terms of life experiences. This is not the case for young people, who often find themselves in social places like cafes, gyms or lectures. For instance, after working for a few years after college, my friend Adam was very grateful when I invited him to my birthday party. He said that it is uncommon for him to go into social events now that all the people in his social circle has moved on and is either at work or with family all the time. For this reason, I believe young people enjoy life more than old people.

To conclude, I believe that life is more enjoyable in younger stages of life than in old ones. Mainly because young people have more money to spend, have a better health condition and are more likely to make good friends.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63731656184 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27580470075 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480083857442 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1292754402 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.48 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.08 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502897467066 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158615367935 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139204663187 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324470703281 0.150856017488 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101575418716 0.0645574589148 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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