young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Some people find life more enjoyable as they get older. Others think that youth is life's peak. Although, both sides of the argument can be seen as valid, I believe that young people can get out more of their life than old people.
To start with, I think young people enjoy life more because they can better spend their money. There are fewer financial worries when one is young. Similarly, Young people do not have to worry about supplying a family on their own. Drawing from my own experience. When I was a teen, I did not have to worry about paying the utility bills or a mortage. It was not until I was older and living by myself, that I understood how much money it takes to support oneself. Although, some people believe that getting older means having more freedom, I think that is not the case with money.
Being younger, in addition to allowing financial freedom, permits making better use of one's well-being. Older people are at a higher risk when making wild changes in their lifestyle. Therefore, old people might miss out in risky activities like extreme sports, traveling, smoking or drinking. For example, my neighbor David, although being in good shape and excellent financial situation for his age, has diet restrictions from his medic that disable him from trying new foods, cuisines and sports. As a result, I think young people are at an advantage by being able to use their weill-being.
Another reason I think life is more vivid during youth is that young people can make friends more easily than old people can. Young people are able to meet more people in common places like college, a party and at work. This is not possible for older people, who might no be interested in social life, since there are simply fewer people who they can relate to, in terms of life experiences. Likewise, old people tend to feel lonely because of the generational gap that might exist in their environment. For instance, after working for a few years after college, my friend Adam was grateful when I invited him to my birthday party. He said that it is uncommon for him to go into social events now that all the people in his social circle has moved on, and is very busy with work or family. For this reason, I believe young people enjoy life more than old people.
To conclude, I believe that life is more enjoyable in younger stages of life than in old ones. Mainly because young people have more money to spend, have a better health condition and are more likely to make good friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63595505618 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27304231671 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498876404494 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6655286952 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9583333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5416666667 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525340597945 0.236089414692 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168063593585 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141396122451 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33551136105 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108550434077 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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