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People believe in the statement "Never, never give up", do you agree or disagree with this thought?

It is a topic of frequent discussion whether people, specially teens and young adults, should never give up on their dreams or be realistic. Although giving up and not chasing their dreams might be the right option for some people. In my opinion, I think it is better for people to follow their dreams and never give up on achieving them.

To start with, I think a reason why people should never give up on chasing their goals is that goals define who we are. For most people, goals and dreams reflect a lot about how they see or want for themselves. For instance, young people have a dream job they want to get, and to achieve it, they have to work diligently towards it. Are only those teens who do not give up that get a high academic performance and consequently get what they want. As a result, I believe never giving up is important because otherwise, we lose a part of our identity.

Another reason I think a "never give up" attitude is important in a person's life is that not giving up offers better opportunities. Common goals such as getting in a prestigious university, getting a high paying job or buying a house are usually only plausible if the person who wishes them puts plenty of effort towards them. This is important because it means that people who never give up end up with a better quality of life. Drawing from my experience, it was thanks to never giving up that I got a high paying job, this was after many years of being hardworking and positive about the future. Thus, I favor the opinion that better opportunities are presented only to those who never give up on them.

Finally, the last reason I believe never giving up cannot be underestimated it is that this life style makes us feel better with ourselves. Accomplishing a goal is one of the most pleasant feelings in the world. Thus, achiving something after years of hardwork and never giving up is a excellent reward and is completely worth the effort, let alone the other adavantages that this brings. An example of this could be the feeling of finally graduating from college after many years. This is a powerful, rewarding emotion for many people, which might push them to pursue a higher degree or a better job. It is my belief that people would feel better with themselves should they adopt the rule of never give up.

In conclusion, I believe that a "never give up" attitude is important in a person's life. I think this because of the reason that our goals define us and it yields better opportunities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62360801782 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5774311963 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445434298441 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4343462737 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339149957962 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125939812618 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944883697551 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208429759242 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553070687734 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments