young people enjoy life more than older people do
Some people find life more enjoyable as they get older. Others think that youth is life's peak. Although, both sides of the argument can be seen as valid, I believe that young people can get out more of their life than old people.
To start with, I think young people enjoy life more because they can better spend their money. Young people do not have have to worry about supplying a family on their own. Similarly, there are fewer financial worries when one is young. Drawing from my own experience. When I was a teen, I did not have to worry about paying the utility bills or a mortage. It was not until I was older and living by myself, that I understood how much money it takes to support oneself. Although, some people believe that getting older means having more freedom, I think that is not the case with money.
Being younger, in addition to allowing financial freedom, permits making better use of one's good well-being. Older people are at a higher risk when making wild changes in their lifestyle, therefore, they are not able to experience life completely. For example, my neighbor David, although being in good shape and excellent financial situation for his age, has diet restrictions that disable him from trying new foods and cuisines. As a result, I think young people are at an advantage by being able to use their weill-being.
Moreover, young people can make friends more easily than old people can. Young people are able to meet more people in common places like colleges, parties and at work. This is not possible for older people, who might no be interested in social life, since there are simply fewer people who share the same life experiences. For this reason, I believe young people enjoy life more than old people.
To conclude, I believe that life is more enjoyable in younger stages of life than in old ones. Mainly because young people have more money to spend and have a better health condition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
... spend their money. Young people do not have have to worry about supplying a family on th...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...d their money. Young people do not have have to worry about supplying a family on th...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ot possible for older people, who might no be interested in social life, since the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72271386431 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30748241037 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510324483776 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5990437034 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.05 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559562331512 0.236089414692 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187370092641 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143571917129 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359389641966 0.150856017488 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139674479674 0.0645574589148 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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