Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is hard to deny that movies and televisions may have some negative effects for young people, and such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that young people should no more be watching televisions and movies. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. In my opinion, I think that young people need to watch movies and televisions.
First of all, watching movies and televisions is an effective way to let young people know what is happening in the world. For example, when I want to see the news happening in my country, I always open the television and turn it to the news channel. And I think knowing the news will benefit young people to grow up with strong responsibility.
Furthermore, watching movies can also benefit young people to cultivate their aesthetics. Take the case of literary and artistic films, watching these kinds of movies can let young people have a good feeling about the artistic. Had it not been for watching movies, young people would never be a person with a good aesthetic.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that there is too much unsuitable content in nowadays televisions and movies such as violence or something else. However, this is an inevitable thing. It is also very important to let young people know what kind of televisions and movies is good for them, and I think they can learn the ability to recognization form this. Therefore, I think movies and televisions have much more positive effects than negative effects for young people.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement that movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. While one sees a circle and another sees a zero, I believe my opponents will compromise after being shown to my article.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...at there is too much unsuitable content in nowadays televisions and movies such as violence...
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Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive effects on the way young people behave. While one sees a circle and anot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98064516129 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76757650457 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493548387097 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2431882883 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34273100115 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138240527 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154060751479 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21714542932 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711692305272 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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