The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop
working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer
I agree with the statement that we should never give up on our goals. This is because giving up can prevent us from achieving success and can lead to feelings of disappointment and regret.
One reason why we should never give up is that perseverance is often the key to achieving our goals. For example, if we want to succeed in a difficult class, we might need to put in extra effort and study harder in order to understand the material. If we give up when things get tough, we might miss out on the opportunity to learn and grow.
Another reason why we should never give up is that giving up can lead to negative consequences. For example, if we give up on a relationship, we might miss out on the opportunity to find happiness and fulfillment. Similarly, if we give up on our dreams, we might never realize our full potential.
In conclusion, the expression "never, never give up" is an important reminder to keep trying and to never stop working for our goals. By continuing to pursue our goals, even when things get tough, we can achieve success and avoid regret.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60824742268 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7565128821 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 212.727598566 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7031643457 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249256587547 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133992649174 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11695319155 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188761376681 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595495909961 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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