Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no shortage of opinions on whether young people enjoy life more or older people. In my opinion, I believe that young people enjoy life more than older people. I think this way mainly for two reasons, which I explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, younger people have more energy than older people hence they feel more active throughout the day. People at a young age have a more metabolism than older people, which results in more energy storage and more activeness. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My age is 25 and my grand parent's age is 75 years. During our whole day, they feel most of the time tired on the other hand, I feel more energetic; I do all my office work and study. At the end of the day, I do still have enough energy to fulfill my hobby of gaming and creative artwork. Which I enjoy a lot. However, my grandparents struggle with tiredness hence they could not enjoy their life properly. For this reason, young people have a more chance of enjoying their life than older people.
Secondly, people at a young age have more money and time than older people do. Most young people are working professionals, who earn enough money to live their luxurious life. While people at an older age will not work they spend most of their time at home surviving on the remaining savings of their life. For instance, one of my friends is a software engineer; he earns 20 lacks rupees money per annum which is enough for him to enjoy his life luxuriously along with his girlfriend. They usually enjoy their life by traveling to a new country every month. However, his parents who leaves in their native place used to live normal life without much enjoyment. It's clearly clear to see that young people have more money and time than older people so they can use it for enjoying their life.
In conclusion, considering the above reasons and compelling example; I agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62253521127 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31708591243 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47323943662 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3193997684 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.05 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493368485209 0.236089414692 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189617254382 0.076458572812 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170938118042 0.0737576698707 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.401345634053 0.150856017488 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956978001964 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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