People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
No doubt that people work because they need money to live, but I think that there are many other reasons why people work other than with the aim of earning money. I will explore these reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think that people work to gain practical experience of the theoretical knowledge which they have gained in their college educational program. Drawing from my own experience, I studied pharmaceutical sciences as my bachelor’s program. After my bachelor’s I got an opportunity to work as a hospital pharmacist in a government hospital for 6 months. I was not provided with any stipend but I still worked because I wanted to apply my pharmaceutical knowledge in real-world situations.
Furthermore, sometimes people work to keep themselves busy and to avoid boredom because people think that too much relaxation to the brain can make it less efficient and lazy. I would like to given an example from my personal life. My mother recently started giving Arabic tuitions to kids not because it was essential for her to earn a living for the house but because she was bored and had nothing to do in her free time.
Lastly, I think that some people work or take up jobs to keep their mind away from a traumatic past such as the recent loss of a close relative, and divorce with a partner. Again, drawing an example from my personal life. My aunt started working in an IT firm after she lost her husband to COVID-19 last year before that, she was a homemaker and never took up a job. Though she has good money and properties to make a living, she still took the job because she wanted to avoid the grieving process.
In light of the above-mentioned points, I think that people work not just to earn money for a living but also for various other reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, still, i think, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68769716088 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67705346443 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1612191408 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285140519333 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101656449992 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105394944955 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193363097847 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131561416525 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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