People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
The capitalist economy is based on the flow of money from one pocket to the other. In order to make money, most people have a job that guarantees them the flow of cash into their wallets. Besides the money problem, there are other reasons too that stimulate people to exercise one profession over the other. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss a few of the most relevant reasons.
To begin with, people work for personal realization. It is not a coincidence that in Maslow’s hierarchy of needs self-actualization is on top of the pyramid. Making money will not satisfy this need, so beside having a well-paid job, we need to have a workplace where we can feel useful to the society by adding something to the common effort of increasing the standards of living. We can accomplish our goals by helping other people. Drawing from my experience, when I was working as an assistant in a retirement home, I would often be there beyond my working hours, that of course, were not paid. My extroverted nature played a huge role in this performance. Basically, I was working for free for the simple cause that I was being useful to the elders and when looking at their faces, I felt proud of what I am doing. Thus, the fact that people can realize themselves by using their skills and abilities is a cause for them to work more.
Secondly, people may enjoy going to work to socialize with their colleagues. It so happens that for many people work is a place where we, social creatures, communicate with each other. If a group of colleagues feel connected with each other, they would rather work and spend some more time together than if there was lack of communication. My personal experience is a great example of this. Last summer I had a job on campus where I would often interact with my colleagues. They were extremely supportive and kind. Some of them would bring me coffee after a night shift and their energy and joy would constantly increase my output. In a month or two I would frequent work not so much for the money, but for their personalities. When I was with them, I felt alive.
In conclusion, besides the obvious point of the job, people enjoy working due to the personal realization in the field, as well as the socialization and interconnection with some of their colleagues.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, of course, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65036674817 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75308880541 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520782396088 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3758565152 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28784750262 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825760033796 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607898186304 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171935988127 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345898517589 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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