If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why?
Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Nowadays, many people wish they could become famous and often this is their biggest dream. It does not really matter to them by what means they will achieve their goal: maybe become an actor, a musician, a TV showrunner, an abstractionist artist, a journalist, or a politician. I often hear celebrities complaining that being famous is not exactly what it seems to be. Therefore, if I could ask them one question, I would ask: “How the publicity has influenced your life?”.
To begin with, being a celebrity implies that there are many advantages and disadvantages. Besides the most obvious ones, such as the lack of privacy or the constant run away from paparazzi, there might be some indirect consequences that the publicity highlights, from shopping for free to receiving death threats because you said something someone else did not appreciate. Each their step, move, and silly smile is watched and analyzed by millions of curious people. Journalists tend to exaggerate every said word during an interview and because of their influence, other people do not understand that celebrities are still people, with families, problems, and opinion they will stick with. To exemplify, Joan Rolling, the famous writer of Harry Potter, nowadays is being bullied and “cancelled” because some people did not like a message written by her on Twitter. If someone else not so famous had written that, nobody would have observed or even disagreed so intensely with that person. This is the reason I would like to know how influencers deal with their popularity, as well as what are the pluses and minuses.
Secondly, I would be interested to know if the overall experience is worth it. Some people like to drag attention upon them, while others wish their life remained private. Many famous people became famous not on their will and now the fact they are recognized on street is ruining their life. In other words, they wish they never got famous. One of my close friends became famous overnight in our country. It’s not comparable to the Hollywood stars, but anyway, she complained that the attention she receives is intimidating and that since that video she was involved in, she avoids getting in a public place.
In conclusion, I’d like to know if the advantages of having a public life exceed the discomfort this lifestyle creates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 626, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03084832905 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69484771155 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583547557841 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1117529233 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.722222222 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154942973821 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501129814372 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731708370838 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844609566276 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728239633331 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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