The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of opinion on whether we should follow our dreams, even though they are likely to remain unrealizable or just abandon them and move on after some moments of unsuccessfulness. In my opinion, we should never stop working in order to achieve our goals, and when we eventually reach them, we should set higher standards. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, most people need a purpose in life. We need to know that our life has a meaning. One such purpose is to reach new heights, have a comfortable life and be proud of who we are. We may have different priorities, such as creating a family, building a house or starting a career, but in the end it is important to have one you’d like to work for. My personal experience is a perfect example for this. When I was a teenager, I did not have any steady goals in life, and I was often feeling depressed for no particular reason. I decided I did not want to feel so miserable anymore, thus I set some life goals, such as becoming a successful doctor and helping those in need. Our days I am actively working every day for this goal and with each passing night I am closer to it. If I stopped working for it, the depression would quickly come back.
Secondly, to achieve your objectives, you need to have a strong will and be ready to make sacrifices. There is a saying that Rome was not built in one day. It is indeed a tough and long process, but in the end the results will be worth it! There are thousands of stories when people did not give up and good for them, because eventually they succeeded and as a result, they changed the world. A friend of mine is a professional runner. He had told me many times about how he wanted to stop everything and just move on, thinking that his goal is unreachable. He’d have many sleepless nights, as well as muscle tears. Nonetheless, fortunately, he did not leave and with the right guidance, he became the 2021 Winner of Madrid’s Marathon. Moreover, soon he’s participating in the Beijing Summer Olympics.
In conclusion, we shall never give up on our goals because the final results will be worth it as well as the fact that goals give our life some purpose.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44794188862 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60244942228 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549636803874 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0035756664 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4761904762 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168111781698 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444606281312 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446233558543 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103411415622 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344274924832 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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