What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities
changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Family is probably the important step in children’s development as social creatures. In family kids learn how to behave thanks to their parents that shape their son/daughter’s moral compass. The establishment of the qualities considered generally good to have, is also installed in family. In my opinion, a good son/daughter needs to have at least respect, loyalty, and compassion.
To begin with, if a parents did a good job during their parenthood, it is important for the children to respect their parents and to be loyal to them. After all, our parents are those that had sleepless nights while making sure we have a shelter, food, and other commodities. They are those that sent us to school to acquire knowledge, that helped us financially and emotionally to go to college and achieve success. If there are any people I can address to anytime, those are my parents. They selflessly will give the emotional support or the advice I need. I think we owe them at least some respect. Drawing from my own experience, my dad was such a parent. When I was three years old, he used to work abroad, thousands of kilometres away from his family, so that me and my brother would have some clothes to wear when going to school. Moreover, because of this job he had numerous scars and has been in some grave accidents, but he never thought of leaving. “How my kids will survive?”, he used to say. For this reason, as their children, respecting our parents has not changed over time in my culture. It is just more acceptable to stop respecting your parents if they generally did not do a great job while parenting.
Secondly, I think a good daughter/son needs to have lots of compassion, not just for his/her parents, but for everybody, especially for those in need. I hope that I am going to educate an empathic person that will make the difference in this cruel world, and that will, hopefully, try to reduce the misery we live in, by promoting only the good values. Unlike respect, this value is new in my culture. In the old times, parents used not to care so much about what their children thought or how they are feeling. The parents needed their kids to be pragmatic, telling us that this is the only way to achieve success in the society. Fortunately, the new generation of parents, whose feelings were violated in the past, don’t make the same mistakes as their fathers and mothers. It’s certainly clear to see why kids need to learn how to be compassionate.
In conclusion, compassion, respect, and loyalty are the characteristics of a good offspring I will be proud of.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...lty, and compassion. To begin with, if a parents did a good job during their parenthood,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, after all, at least, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72787610619 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7767337667 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535398230088 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2823153574 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0416666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140829714664 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385098634801 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420823723102 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883676989958 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052280612576 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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