There are plenty of places and periods in history that I wish if I had a chance to visit.
It is hard to choose, but if I had to, I would like to visit two places; the first one is in Egypt when the great pyramids were built.
The second option is Damascus city when the old Damascene houses were built.
I feel this way because I am a civil engineer, and I am interested in the details of old buildings, so I have my causes, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I would like to see how great pyramids were constructed. The Egyptian pyramids are considered as one of the world’s greatest mysteries and as one of the greatest human achievements.
Even after years of studying Egyptian records and how the Egyptian pyramids were built, there are still many mysteries that scholars are unable to answer.
For instance, it is still unclear how the Egyptians were able to build the pyramids so that they always face the North Star.
Secondly, I would like to back in time to see the previous life in Damascus city, which is now regarded as the capital of Syria country as well as the oldest city in the world.
Damascus has many historic (monumental) places where you will be amazed at the accuracy of the construction, especially in old Damascene houses.
These houses illustrate the lives of previous Syrian people and the warmth that lived in which Syrian families, in addition, show the advantages of Damascene architecture.
Some architects say that it is impossible to feel deeply and note all these valuable details for one visit.
Therefore, if I had the opportunity to travel back in time, I would be able to see in person how they were built both of pyramids and Old Damascene houses because, in building, some engineering issues should be taken into account to provide unique features that last forever.
To sum up, going back in time is an unreal dream, but we have the right to imagine and wish. If I can stop the time and fly through time, I would opt for these two periods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Syrian people and the warmth that lived in which Syrian families, in addition, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60773480663 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5501412299 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2244727647 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144758464346 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470717540314 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396848120959 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482209647339 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435784950129 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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