All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
I do not completely agree with the suggestion given. For any company to be successful, it is important and crucial for the Chief Executive Officer of the company to take into consideration the opinions and suggestions from both the consultants and also its fellow employees.
The company A, for example is a production for making different preserved foods such as jams, jellies etc. if the company is seeking advices oly from the consultants which could be probably counted as a 'Third Party' then, it would have a third party perspective for the company. This would play a pivotal role when the company is in deficit or experiencing some majors issues in marketing. The consultant advises would be of great help here in such matters.
This suggestions would help the company in different aspects. If the company is facing issues about its revenues or gross domestic products or about the international markets, it is a healthy choice to consider the consultant's perspective as they have a better knowledge and a great depth of understanding of such matters.
However, the company is facing a problem in the department of recruitment for the scientists for Quality Assurance or Quality Control, there stands the role of the employees who would be in a better position to choose or hire a candidate for the position. His or her role here would be pivotal as compared to that of the consultant as he would be having better knowledge of the internal issues of the company or the internal matters rather.
The company should always take consider opinions of the fellow employees during various discussion meetings and ask what would they do to make their company run more smoothly. Such healthy discussions lead to different opinions which is important for the gradual increase in company's growth. Therefore, it is important for the companies to give an equal opportunities for its employees and also consider and seek advices of the hired consultants for the growth of the company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'delay'
Suggestion: delay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, third, as to, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 28.8173652695 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 444.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93693693694 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76673765827 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443693693694 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 705.55239521 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0145894276 57.8364921388 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 119.503703932 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 23.324526521 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.70786347227 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256119351801 0.218282227539 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955024746133 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706805187138 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143198765233 0.128457276422 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716480133828 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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