Technology can play a vital role in advancing the education process, it aids schools with improved methods for instructing students. While many people argue that these technologies all too often distract students from real learning, I believe technologies, such as; video, computers, and the Internet, have many positive effects on the education progress if we use them correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 19.5258426966 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 58.6224719101 7% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 327.0 2235.4752809 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 58.0 442.535393258 13% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63793103448 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.75966902107 4.55969084622 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94262414536 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 215.323595506 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.931034482759 0.4932671777 189% => OK
syllable_count: 99.0 704.065955056 14% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.5 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302317484833 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205045083627 0.0831039109588 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296524201491 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302317484833 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 100.480337079 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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