Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
For a leader, respect amongst his/her peers does not outweigh the importance of one's decision and judgment to be made.
A team's work may it be a community service event, sports, government or any organization, all that is visible to the eyes of the outside world is their work. Whereas an ocean of thinking and brains have gone into whatever is being presented to us. The key element of success behind a team is its leader. And a Leaders decisions and approach to any situation decides the place of the team in this world.
To be an effective leader is to make sound judgments and feasible decisions throughout the line, may it be a team or any association. In the longer run, these decisions are what will shine bright amongst the public. Suppose a team principal for a race car team makes the right decisions and helps the team win the race every single time, the world observes the victory and the teams work.
Everyone in the team has his/her's personal opinion and way of working which must always be considered by the team leader. But at the end of the day, it is just an opinion. The end result depends on the entire team, whereas the team leader is always held responsible for it. The team can function better with the cohesive action of everyone working towards the same goal, but it is not very practical. These lead to biased decisions on the fear of losing respect or likeness within the leader and team members destroying their own potential.
A Team always requires a leader to make the right decisions as he/she knows what is best for the team. Although respect amidst the team members is an important factor, it does not play a positive role in all the cases as discussed above and shouldn't be the downfall for the team.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ers does not outweigh the importance of ones decision and judgment to be made. A ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...k. Everyone in the team has his/hers personal opinion and way of working which must always be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...in all the cases as discussed above and shouldnt be the downfall for the team.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60256410256 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.417338205 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7312159099 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166019273899 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715190298954 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065270912772 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123056097 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061105540865 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ers does not outweigh the importance of ones decision and judgment to be made. A ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...k. Everyone in the team has his/hers personal opinion and way of working which must always be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...in all the cases as discussed above and shouldnt be the downfall for the team.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60256410256 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.417338205 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7312159099 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166019273899 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715190298954 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065270912772 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123056097 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061105540865 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.