Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
An effective leader should not just have a sound moral judgment as a characteristic but also the ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. Personally i believe that it is the respect we maintain among peers that should be given more importance. I feel this way for three reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First reason, without the respect of fellow peers, all decisions be it morally sound, just and prudent will always be treated as a bad one. This is because it is a natural tendency for humans not to deliberate decisions made by people whom they despise and have little or no respect. For instance, in the early 2010's election held in India, a political party's prime candidate was ridiculed for every decision made as most peers didn't have the veneration towards him.
Second reason, administrations fall as peers would deliberately not follow instructions given by the leader since they have very little respect for the leader. Peers would be remiss of their obligations towards the leader as they do not have innate feeling of respect and responsibility towards the leader who is trying to manage the organisation. For example, a school in Oman was rated the most poorly administered education centre in the country mainly because most employees felt the principal was arrogant and irrational subsequently having no respect for him which later led to the apparent rating.
Third reason, moral judgment should be diplomatically used in organisations so that leaders can effectively administer with the help of their peers. For instance, the prime minister of India started a initiative of cleaning the entire country with the help of the people by making moral judgments in diplomatic way by posting necessary ads in various parts of the country.
In Conclusion, I am of the opinion that respect among peers is a more important characteristic for an effective leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, third, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07255520505 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85230375948 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0645980424 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302232974071 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13180946087 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165875712151 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201744651953 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124461581263 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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