In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Leaders are the most important asset in any of the organizations, be it a political body private firm or education institute. In some countries we see presidential tenure is restricted to only for some years, but this type of limit is not visible in any other field. The prompt recommends that people who are making decisions should be required to step down after five years irrespective of their field. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this suggestion for the following reasons.
To begin, ‘Don’t change something until it is broken’ this is the fundamental rule followed by the football coaches. Similarly it is not advisable to change the leader when he is doing a good job. There are many executives like Warren Buffett,Jeff Bezoz and mark zuckerberg who are synonymous with their company names. It is unimaginable to see these companies without them. For example, When Steve jobs is fired from Apple, it slips into a period of mediocrity and later rehires him to clean the mess created by previous leadership.
Further, It is very difficult for the leader to implement and see the results within a five years period timeline. For instance, In the drug manufacturing industry it takes years to research the disease, later companies develop a drug and put this into a series of trials to see efficacy and safety before releasing it into the market. So changing leadership might jeopardize the whole project.
Some might argue this rule might prevent bad leaders holding power for too long, However it shouldn't be a problem as long as there is a system to take opinion of all the people involved and do necessary actions if required.
I like to conclude that leaders are the one the most important and hardest role in any of the organization. So to impose restrictions on their tenure will ultimately affect the the company or the society(in case of government) in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... rule followed by the football coaches. Similarly it is not advisable to change the leade...
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...e mess created by previous leadership. Further, It is very difficult for the le...
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..., later companies develop a drug and put this into a series of trials to see effi...
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...ip might jeopardize the whole project. Some might argue this rule might prevent...
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...ht prevent bad leaders holding power for too long, However it shouldnt be a probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89751552795 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77256846858 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8718660129 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152950120844 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457378167271 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575203113398 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794518683848 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676636244616 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.