Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In democratic society policy making, its execution and modifications are left to the subject expertise and politicians elected by the people. Therefore the prompt recommends that the general public should be eliminated in these decision making. In my opinion, I agree to this suggestion for some extent due to the following reasons.
To begin, There is a famous quote “Government is for the people, by the people and to the people”. Regarding any subject every individual has a different opinion and perspective. So involving the general public in these decision making leads to bedlam. For example, Unemployed people might be feeling positive regarding development of factories in their region whereas some farmers might feel scared of losing their lands. So involving these people only raises hatred and protests among themselves.
Further, The government officers are subject expertise and Politicians are the representatives of the people, so any decision made by them is for the betterment of their country. Some decisions might harm some sections of people but it might be good for the future in the long run. For instance, Decision to ban coal mines might impact several workers' lives but it might reduce the environmental damage it is causing.
Some information might be sensitive. Especially regarding military decisions ,These information should not be divulged to any individuals outside of the department. For instance, US military operation to assassinate osama bin laden is a secret mission and can not be informed to the public prior.
Some might argue that politicians can be corrupted and make biased decisions, It is true but their next tenure will be dependent on their decisions and people might not elect next time if there is any such allegation. Justice might be delayed but it can not be annihilated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26279863481 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9091354174 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5459702203 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155134288336 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612270713013 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448052395403 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993511416605 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283940831928 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.