In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements with that field

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In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements with that field.

Today everyone enjoying the convenience of highly developed technology in many different fields, we are lucky enjoy these achievements accumulated by many fore runners. Even in today, the most experienced scholar must reference a lot of achievements of the study before his new research published. This means a remarkable contribution in any field must base on past achievement. Obviously past achievement can help and instruct researchers make new contribution, with the help of these experience, we can reach such a high position.

Isaac Newton is well known with his contribution of exploring many principles of physic, when everyone admiring his great achievement, he just says that he is only standing on the shoulders of the giant. This means that his contribution is made with a lot of help of past achievements. Today with the advance technology of communication, we can contact with our friend any time and any place. We can benefit from it thanks to the great theory of electromagnetic field established by Maxwell. However, Maxwell is not the first person established the theory of electromagnetic field but he is inspired a lot from an elder scientist who first mentioned the conception of “field”. In a word, every great thing is developed step by step, great contribution must base on past achievement. So, it is more possible to a significant contribution with strong influence by past achievement.

Since many great contributions based on past achievement of that field, when combining achievements from different fields, there will be more considerable discovery. With every field highly developed today, great contribution seems harder to make new achievement. However, when significant achievements in different fields come to reference each other, many new contributions will be made. One hundred years ago, a famous physicist says that the skyscraper of science is nearly complete. Thinking about the possibilities of the combination of different fields, considerable contribution will be made with the interaction of different fields.

Of course, many contributions must base on the past achievement before, there is still many significant achievements discovered by coincidence. Antibiotic was found occasionally due to a false operation before a researcher leaving his laboratory, even the famous equation indicates the relationship between mass and energy was explored occasionally by Albert Einstein. Obviously, luck sometime plays an important role in making new contributions. However, and without the direction of past achievements, praying significant contribution is made just like rolling a dice and the possibility is extremely low. So, if someone is hope to make great achievement, he must be instructed by past goals.

Viewing through many significant contributions, many of them is not made by coincidence but based on many past achievements before. So, new significant achievement must base on the direction of past goals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ience of highly developed technology in many different fields, we are lucky enjoy these achiev...
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Line 7, column 566, Rule ID: DIE_DICE[1]
Message: 'die' is the singular form of 'dice'. Consider using 'die'?
Suggestion: die
...ontribution is made just like rolling a dice and the possibility is extremely low. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, well, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 12.9106741573 287% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2523.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54505494505 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36423864768 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465934065934 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0594142722 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.695652174 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21739130435 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374707659637 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118433101289 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786654540801 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209389536453 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599004143415 0.0667264976115 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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