In any field of enquiry the beginer is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Through the statement it is stated that the beginer is more likely to make substantial contribution to any particular field than the expert of that field. I agree with the statement and will be presenting my points in the following paragraphs.
A person takes up a new field of his/her interest because the field seems to excite them. They are intrigued by that field and they wish to learn more about that field. There is a certain level of enthusiasm in them that helps them uncover facts related to that field which lacks in the experts of that field.
Moreover, since the person is a beginer he/she will be doing a lot of research in order to learn facts and the fundamentals about that field. Their research in the field will be much more one and they will have a lot of knowledge about the recent findings and the new research being done in that field. Whereas the expert will only have such knowledge if he/she continuously keep researching about all of the recent findings and keep themselves updated continuously.
Also, the beginer will always be more diligent towards their work and will be willing to go the extra mile in order to contribute or to learn more about the field. They will be eager to put in the extra hours and the extra efforts into their work. Such type of enthusiasm may not always be found in the expert unless and until the expert is extremely passionate about their work.
On the other hand, since the expert is the "expert" of the field he/she may have a deeper understanding of the field and they will be able to work out the problems that the beginer cannot. The can look at the problems from a bigger perspective and may be able to solve it in a better and quicker way than the beginer.
In conclusion, the beginer is more likely to make a bigger contribution to any particular field of enquiry than the expert since they are highly motivated to go the extra mile for their work.
Comments
Beginner is the person who…
Beginner is the person who have many ideas to deal with the problem, but expert is one of the persons who have experienced a lot of things in their life. Basically, expert have vast experience than beginner. therefore, I disagree with the statement that in any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. here, in any field makes the above statement little bit confusing because some field of study requires freshers to explore more ideas likewise some field requires expert who have gain more experiences in their life.
we see many scientific creations around us. all those creations haven't become perfect. there are a lot of hard work behind it. people who have involve on those activities to create perfect creations on onetime doesn't achieve success because they have to face so many problem and failure; but these failures provide them a lot of experience to deal with the obstacles which make them expert. for example, a new chef can make a new dish perfectly but making the same dish again and again with same flavor and aroma makes him/her perfect and expert chef. similarly, newton-who discover that apple fell form the tree due to certain force didn't make him expert until he found that apple fell due to gravitational force.
in the aspect of in any field of inquiry we can say that in the field of bank and big business organization- they search for those candidates who have gain a lot of experiences on this field. this is for the reason that they have many new and experience ideas to deal with the problems to make the business profitable. hence, we can say that expert can contribute more than beginner in any field. for example, a new comer can make film which can attract many people, but that film maker was guided by a director who have a lot of experiences in the field of film industry. "Always listen to experts. They’ll tell you what can’t be done and why. Then do it.” Robert Heinlein has described in these lines the true meaning of an expert.
Although there is no comparison between experts and beginners but still there are beginners who have created history. Madam Curie is one such example who discovered radium. Radium is used till date and Madam Curie won Nobel Prize for this discovery of hers. A beginner has many ideas and his area of thinking is vast as compared to an expert’s restricted vision.
All the important discoveries are made by experts and there contribution in the history cannot be denied. In any field of enquiry, we need to trust our experts as they have put in so many years of research into it. There has been so much practice gone by an expert into discovering something and such practices make a perfectionist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
...e such knowledge if he/she continuously keep researching about all of the recent fin...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...she continuously keep researching about all of the recent findings and keep themselves upd...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'put'.
Suggestion: put
... about the field. They will be eager to put in the extra hours and the extra effort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59365994236 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52725757884 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409221902017 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8364498701 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349640500546 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148474423059 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168535801547 0.0758088955206 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239578512831 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150524547218 0.0667264976115 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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