In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev

Mind is the most mysterious thing in the universe, every individual have different level of thinking, the way they think is different. As the way they think is different, the result will obviously will be different. So i am in strong agreement with the author.

Different people have different level of knowledge and understanding of the things, some gets it from education and some from the experience; causing people to think and behave differently. For instant, the development of any country or a place needs different views, based on this thing most of the country nowadays have at least two political parties-- to insure if the decision one making is worth or not-- they discuss, they oppose their views and finally come to an agreement, which most of the time provides good results.

Debating or sharing ideas with the people having same thoughts results nothing except shaking their head up and down, diversity is the key of success, by realizing it America is so developed, because of diversity. They are open to most of the country for education and work, just because they think diversity which cause contrasting points help progress better.

Contradiction to any situation is always good, as it reveals the good and bad expect of the idea. Debating with the person having opposite view flourish new ideas or techniques for the same problem, and they have time to analyze if the idea is good for the situation, in terms of health, cost and reliability. Sharing opposite ideas insure if there are any alternative.

In a nutshell, its always good to have conversation with the people having contrasting ideas, as it help building more knowledge and provide alternative to the same problem, may be in more efficient way, for any progress to happen efficiently, we need discussion among people having different point of view.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lt will obviously will be different. So i am in strong agreement with the author....
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'alternatives'?
Suggestion: alternatives
... opposite ideas insure if there are any alternative. In a nutshell, its always good to h...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...le having contrasting ideas, as it help building more knowledge and provide alternative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72535892538 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3206771965 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187240088395 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067599371038 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058324115193 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109413694443 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595742402269 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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