To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your positi
Should an effective leader be a representation of high moral and ethical standards? As far as I am concerned it is a wrong question due to the fact that the world of politics is not a right place for a saint person. At this point a tension is obvious: on one hand we cannot elect a criminal or person who conspicuously demonstrates immoral behavior, at the same time, the world of politics demands from a person to be equivocate and even dishonest. Although these characteristics are in conflict with high standards of our society, a leader has to compromise his or her moral standards in order to be efficient in the world of politics.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 58.6224719101 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 525.0 2235.4752809 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 114.0 442.535393258 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60526315789 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 4.55969084622 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06597456962 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 215.323595506 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.4932671777 139% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 704.065955056 24% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2822129984 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127330106392 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904471334862 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901760335076 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127330106392 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 100.480337079 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.