The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things

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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

One can gain different ideas if one sees their daily tasks as a new challenge for them and trying to learn something new from it daily. Ofcourse a ticket collector cannot gain new ideas if he simply just provides tickets to the passengers thinking that it's his job and doing it just for money and nothing else, but if one takes a passionate interest in those works then he or she can definitely think of many new ideas which can ease their work and gain some new ideas. In the above prompt author claims that best ideas arises from passionate interest in commonplace things. I partially agree with the author that interest in commonplace things can help gaining new ideas but sometimes people need to think out these limits and out of the box to get new ideas.

Firstly, consider the example of Scientist Ranchordas Chanchad, he invented machines from the things we use in our daily life. For example, he made a electricity generator completely from 10 bicycles. Paddling each cycle can generate a current which is converted to electricity and with the use of this method he provided electricity in many small rural areas. In a conference he said "If one sees the things differently, then one can generate new things from it." it means to say that if we are passionate to use the things we daily use and see it in a complete different manner then obviously we can start thinking of many different ideas. From the above example, we can say that ideas cannot arise if one cannot start showing interest in his mundane jobs.

However, consider a person working as a programmer for 8 hours a day daily. For them ideas cannot arises if they cannot think beyond their limits. Interest in their work can lead them to finish what they have started but they are packed inside a cubicle where they cannot see beyond the cube. Sometimes, one has to leave what he does and start climbing to find the peak where they can think of some ideas. If Elon Musk would have enjoyed his daily life as a owner of Tesla and never thought anything beyond that, SpaceX would never been formed. Elon Musk said "Growing is the only means of expanding your thoughts." one should always go far beyond what he does daily.

Ofcourse, many agree that passionate interest in commonplace things can give rise to new ideas, while many believe that one has to think far beyond his mundane jobs. In my opinion, i conclude that it explicitly depends on what kind of ideas you are thinking of. If you want to make something new from your daily life things, then you must definetely show interest in that job what you are doing, but if you want to fly in something else then you must think beyond what you do daily.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... just provides tickets to the passengers thinking that its his job and doing it j...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ickets to the passengers thinking that its his job and doing it just for money and...
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Line 1, column 656, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to gain' or 'gain'.
Suggestion: to gain; gain
...interest in commonplace things can help gaining new ideas but sometimes people need to ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in our daily life. For example, he made a electricity generator completely from 1...
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...then obviously we can start thinking of many different ideas. From the above example, we can s...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had enjoyed'?
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...y can think of some ideas. If Elon Musk would have enjoyed his daily life as a owner of Tesla and ...
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...beyond his mundane jobs. In my opinion, i conclude that it explicitly depends on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62785862786 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40319691182 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43659043659 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4575987541 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7222222222 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268614208263 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100969772077 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129347229544 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167054962816 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912553251151 0.0667264976115 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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