The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement above and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how those considerations shape your position.
Ideas that change people’s lives does not come from out of the blue. Steve Jobs, Bill Gates, and Elon Musk are people who we consider as someone known to have the best ideas and minds of the time. Their thoughts not only brought new technological developments but revolutionized our lives. However, their ideas were creative, not innovative. Their creations eliminated the difficulties we faced in our daily lives.
First of all, in order to have the best ideas, one has to always have an open mind and look for flaws that can be renovated. For example, if we look at how cell phones were developed, they were invented because the creator of the cell phones thought that it would be more convenient if the computers were portable. The creator was concerned in the difficulties we faced in daily lives with always having to use bulky computers only in certain places and wanted to solve such problem. Due to concerns and interests in people’s daily lives, one brought cell phones into our lives which has now become one of the essential things humans need nowadays.
Secondly, some people might say I am only considering the technological aspects, and in other fields, the cause of the best ideas might be different. However, this can also be argued with the example of Martin Luther King, Junior. In the 1800’s, the discrimination black people faced was very troublesome. They were disdained and faced opprobrium daily. It had not occurred to anyone that this can be overturned until Martin had the problem risen up to the surface. Martin had passionate interest in trying to have the discriminations eliminated and brought up with the idea of making it into a social and political problem. Due to Martin’s passionate interest in the common treatments black people faced, people came to realize the upsetting truth and were able to fight back.
In sum, through investigating in various angles and views, one can maintain that the best ideas that make our lives better or even bring revolution to the society, come from passionate interests in omnipresent things rather than out of the blue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67642211563 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.869166713 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978743824529 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324694212672 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273054212206 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668769219363 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176275575111 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.