The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Cooperation and competition are two sides of a coin. While looking at first cooperation might look better than competition but compeition has its own significance too. Therefore, I believe the best way to prepare the younger generation for any fields would be by instilling both cooperation and competition.

Competition is necessary at times such as one preparing for entrance exams, while during the preparation of exams, students cooperate with each other in understanding the concepts, queries, etc, to accelerate their preparation, while in the exam the students compete with each other in order to outperform others to achieve better rank/percentage to get in their dream colleges.

While considering any democratic nation, every country has a ruling/governing party and an opposition party, they compete each other to win over the public and to ace the elections. This we can understand as an interior competition but when the nation is jeopardized/attacked by the other nations, the same competiting parties of the nation come together or cooperate to fight back the outsiders. This shows the sense of cooperation among all the nationals of the country.

On a general note, we should all be cooperative with each other instead of cooperative as a society, only then we can grow as humans, society and as a nation. If we ignore the lower echelon of our nation with a thought that they are lower in class (imbibing competitive behavior), this would not help in the long run because the development of any nation not only depends on rich/effluent society people but on all of its nationals. Therefore, there are so many tycoons in the world who do charities for the well being of everybody with a sense of cooperation.

Thus, we should instill the sense of both cooperation and competition among the young people because this comes handy depending upon the situation they are in. Kids are solipistic, self-centered, all they want is attention and cooperation, they don't understand what's competition at the very young age but making them understand the values of both sides of the coin will help them to discern when to be competitive and when to be cooperative.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11516853933 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13607336159 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530898876404 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4487360944 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.75 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319284709358 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116148960873 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595624248427 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170014258831 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058244708828 0.0667264976115 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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