The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition.
Society is a vast place to live. We all live in a society, so our responsibility towards the society can not be neglected. One of our responsibilities is to prepare our young people for the future. The topic here says that the best way for a society to preapre its young people for leadership in different fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. I totally agree with this statement. Cooperation and supporting each other help us to grow and flourish. It also increase our respect for others. Whereas if we consider each other as our competitor, there will be less sense of friendship and cooperation.
We can not live alone in a society. Society is a place where we will need everyone. If we continue to compete with each other, everything will be seemed like a race. This sense of competition should be avoided from the mind of the young people from the beginning of their life. When they enter their school life, there are some students who compete for everything such as good marks, captaincy etc. It creates a rivaly among them. But parents and teachers should encourage them to grow themselves with the aim of achieving something only by performing good, not by competing with each other. Participation is always better than competition. If all the children are encouraged to participate in their works and inspire to perform well not paying attention to others work, they will do good.
Leadership is not about taking only yourslef to the highest position. A leader does not walk alone, rather he inspired everyone to do good. This sense of leadership should be installed among the children from the very beginning. True sense of leadership and true essence of leadership should be expressed to them properly. A good leader is like a good friend, who helps us to grow, inspires us to learn new things, encourages us to perform our duties properly, directs us whenever we need any guidance. We can see many examples around us. Bangladeshi leader Bangabandhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahman inspired his followers to cooperate and fulfill their duties. During his governemnt, all his officials were inspired to do so. This can be an example in a smaller field like a company. If the CEO of a company encourage his employees to cooperatively work and perform well rather than competing with each other which ultimately leads towards animosity, then the overall performance of the company will be good and it will be able to contribute in the society more.
Besides, we should also keep in mind that a society needs people from all the fields. No field is superior than other. A society can not be developed with the contribution from only one field. So the young people should be encouraged to respect people from all the fields and acknowledge their contributions. It will help them to grow empathy inside them.
Competition only creates hostility in us. Some people might say that competion can encourage younf people to give their best. But that can also be brough out if we can give them the realization that one can achieve his goal if he performs his duties properly. Performing well does not mean only competition. Rather performing cooperatively and properly leads the society towards the way of development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, then, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2703.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89673913043 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79276563308 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447463768116 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8003415384 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0540540541 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9189189189 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7027027027 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278353558226 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707412327083 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909076551998 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179340504449 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108419911681 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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