The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A strong leader is an important aspect of every society, which will contribute to the society's development and progress. The prompt states that the inclusion of cooperation than the competition is important for upcoming leaders in different sections like government, industry and other fields. In my opinion I mostly agree with this suggestion, in support providing a following three reasons.
To begin, cooperative skill is an important factor in a leader in order to the develop a prominent society. Cooperative leader will have a knowledge to trickily deal with the opponents without letting them known, which will result in peaceful progression of society without any intruptioons by opponents. For example, the Indian prime minister narendar modi have a great skill of cooperating with people as well as opponents which makes him the best leader in the world. The good example of cooperation shown by him in kashmir . He won hearts of people living there and guaranteed them to provide a security against terrorist and it result it in removal of section 377 in kashmir, which was very complex topic during that time. This illustrates why the good leader achieve quality of cooperativeness.
Furthermore, at a young age if a sense of cooperation indulged in youngsters. During their leadership time they will consider a each and every stakeholder while making any decision. which consider as an one type of cooperation. For example, the young leader from Maharastra state Mr. aditya thakare who did an appreciable work in his constituency which makes him a favorite among all leaders in Maharastara state. He has a unique style of working considering each and everyone in society which makes him stand uniquely among his competitors.
On the other side, competition is also necessary in order to survive in current competing world. So a healthy competition in every field of work is necessary.
In conclusion, the choice between competition and cooperation is a complex topic and there does not exist an easy answer to this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mportant factor in a leader in order to the develop a prominent society. Cooperative leader...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...t society. Cooperative leader will have a knowledge to trickily deal with the opponents wit...
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Suggestion: .
...e of cooperation shown by him in kashmir . He won hearts of people living there an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people living there and guaranteed them to provide a security against terrorist ...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...ide a security against terrorist and it result it in removal of section 377 in kashmir...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...youngsters. During their leadership time they will consider a each and every stak...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eir leadership time they will consider a each and every stakeholder while making...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... stakeholder while making any decision. which consider as an one type of cooperation....
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... making any decision. which consider as an one type of cooperation. For example, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17629179331 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97202289867 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3620286294 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219543604395 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670510586535 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387384573618 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11180749698 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382560159131 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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