The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The issue of instilling in young people the sense of cooperation, not a competition for leardship in various field is a controversial one. On the one hand, it is a best way to devlope young people. On the other hand, sometime it might be go wrong way because of lack of experiance. However, in the finale analysis, I believe that it should be a need to devlope a sense of cooperation into the young people for the leardership.
The main reason is that leardership in cardinal and pompous field by callow people is a best way to run companies or industry. The young people has vim and zeal to manage everything. They always ready to take a risk. For example, Mr. Ratan tata founder of TCS company started their own firm at a age of twentyfive, Mark Zackurberg founder of facebook launched his site at a age of twenty. However, it is a proof that young people can handle large industry and government field with ease.
Another reason for my view is that to lead large fields, young people should be an aboveboard and genial. They should be cooperative rather than competitor. This helps them to lead industry pacefully. For example, Mr. Ratan tata founder of TCS were so kind and down to earth. He was always try to learn new things from people. He cooperate with other business people when there was a down side of TCS. He always believe in "Running alone might give you fast success but running together gives you far success."
Some might argue, It is a risk to give these big industry and government in hand of rudimentry people who lacks the experiance. The new young people are always try to gain instant success. They do not put their laborious effort into the work. For example, Successful company of IT field the Tech is now having new CEO. He is son of founder of Mr. Reddy but now he is now able to manage company, share are going down in recent analysis, the young CEO always comes in moot news.
While there are arguments to be made on both side, it is limpid that there are more advantages to instilling sense of cooperation rather than competition in young and callow people to lead pompous fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60104986877 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58702661732 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49343832021 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0267073526 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4761904762 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294079623378 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902140604064 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863130514137 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174850497116 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941166054948 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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