The best way for a society to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.
Write a response inwhich you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compeling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leadership is a vital role that need not be viewed or considered in a trivial way. Society preparing young individuals ahead of this position by incooperating in them a best skill to lead. Moreso, cooperation should be the cogent role to be considered with a minute competition role in leadership due to the the following reasons below.
Youths coming up with visions -with a leadership aspiration- need to be guide in the right path by proviidng a good orientation for him or her to contribute a great quota to the world. Therefore, cooperation at his peak will surely assist youths to go far even though competition should not be disdain. Cooperation tends to reduce enemity and also makes an individual move far. For instance, taking our mobile car we rie around to our various works or homes. We will notice cooperation lead to the car been assembled together.
In leading one need to be scrupulous now that he or she will be the public figure. There will be lots of enemity -those who will hate for no reason- surrounding. If cooperation in now embedded their will be low enemy coupled will minimum hullabaloo. In which the project laid down will be accomplished with ease. For example taking Nigeria Oyo state government - governor seyi makinde- as an example who made life so easy for the state and also elevated cooperation among peoples. One will see cooperation makes life easy -where their ill be zero assasination taking place- for the leaders who embrace cooperation.
Youth wo will later be old and become our future tomorrow should be guide well making them know competition should be activated but cooperation should be placed at an higher level than competition. If competition is at its peaks their is tendency to forget cooperation inwhich one will be open to lots of dangers. A leader with good cooperation makes life easy for the people he or she is rullin. For example barack Obama president for USA laid down a great example for the youth to follow. He created a good cooperation platform for those who surround him coupled with the masses view. An adage says no one knows all.. Yes it is true. Through cooperation, it is easy to detect ones laps and trace back his or her step as a young leader but laying a competition foundation as a leader will lead to lots of hulaballo inwhich the leader might not be able to handle himself.
Conclusively, competition should be considered but mostly cooperation should be given much attention. A peaceful leader is really a great leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a trivial way" with adverb for "trivial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e that need not be viewed or considered in a trivial way. Society preparing young individuals ah...
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... this position by incooperating in them a best skill to lead. Moreso, cooperation...
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...e competition role in leadership due to the the following reasons below. Youths c...
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Suggestion: the; the
...e competition role in leadership due to the the following reasons below. Youths c...
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... to the car been assembled together. In leading one need to be scrupulous ...
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...o will hate for no reason- surrounding. If cooperation in now embedded their will ...
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Message: Did you mean 'guided'?
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...nd become our future tomorrow should be guide well making them know competition shoul...
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...ted but cooperation should be placed at an higher level than competition. If compe...
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...ed at an higher level than competition. If competition is at its peaks their is te...
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...etition. If competition is at its peaks their is tendency to forget cooperation inwhi...
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Suggestion: .
...ses view. An adage says no one knows all.. Yes it is true. Through cooperation, it...
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...rough cooperation, it is easy to detect ones laps and trace back his or her step as ...
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...ndation as a leader will lead to lots of hulaballo inwhich the leader might not b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84686774942 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78059945421 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517401392111 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4238244613 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0416666667 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160083626224 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545675004737 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437293275515 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973825287621 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445697308674 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.