The best way for the society to prepare its young people in leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Cooperattion or competition has always been a controversial debate among parents, teachers, and experts. Specificly for leadership, selecting between two strategies could be debating argument. While some people believe competetion could help children for preaparing in leadership in government, some claim cooperation has more ueful effects than the other. I strongly believe cooperation have more benefits for chidren to achive this purpose which I explain now.
The most important reason for choosing cooperation method is that it can help to improve friendship of pupils and people in the group. When sense of cooperation spread in the company or office, people try to support each other and compensate the others errors because the success of the their colleagues would equivalent with success of the company and themselves. If a manager could expand this sense in the comapny then all of his or her colleagues would support him and all of them try to improve thier efficincy to evolve the company.
On the other hand, some individuals maintain competetion could be persuade people to work harder to achive better positons. They compare their positions with each others and it whets them to try for that. It can help to burgen their potential abilities. Although I do understand competition can motivate poeple to work hareder, in fact I believe it could also be detrimental. For example, individal may try to destory the others achivement to get promotion whereas it would detriment the whole company and this trend would be happen to get leadership of a company.
However, competition in some cases could be beneficial such that sport. It can help athletes to endure peresure of training to cope the other atheletes. Because of the spirit of sport which bendes to coompetition and fighting, it may be reasonable but for leadership of a company or government it seems it would not have any benefit for them.
In conclusion, although some state competition could be beneficial for the company dut to motivating people, I strongly reckon cooperation have several benefits like playing supportive role and helping each other in the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21676300578 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85867956388 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4959860907 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137202095601 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488784310522 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374201217614 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840734430823 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281752763556 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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